I love it when Wonka’s hidden sexual prowess manifests itself. The description of the cane on her thigh--I felt it. The combination of internal and external ministrations is dead sexy. I enjoy the parts where you outline the action fully but leave just enough up to the reader’s imagination to fill in themselves. It makes me conjure up more mental images--like the things he’s doing that she doesn’t want to look at -- that’s eerie oddball enough to be typically Wonka-esque.

I like the character of the strong, resourceful heroines you write for. They know how to distance themselves from the unpleasantness and find a spark of enjoyment...just like we do as readers, in a way.

Terrific threat about fathers disappearing! Good work; thanks!