This was a really funny piece, I loved your dialogue and light-hearted tone, your characterization of Twelve and his tinkering with the TARDIS, and Clara's questions—and the ending was quite beautifully described, with both the lovely, peaceful place and the air of mystery :) It felt quite magical. Well done!
Just two little typos I spotted: "which wire who went where" and "as a gesture of affections".
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Date: 2015-01-29 08:58 pm (UTC)Just two little typos I spotted: "which wire who went where" and "as a gesture of affections".