*giggles* I just adored it! The dialogue was smashing, I love the image of River just drinking her rage away, the delightful flirting with the Master, and your use of the otters XD Delightful!
Just two typos you had: "the budding black eye that more than one of the customer’s" and "If one remember’s some of the things your husband has been seen in, so; no."
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Date: 2015-03-13 09:10 pm (UTC)Just two typos you had: "the budding black eye that more than one of the customer’s" and "If one remember’s some of the things your husband has been seen in, so; no."