Thank you! I think I spend far too much time thinking about the cause of actions when I write. :)

But I think you did added a whole new layer!With the Master's need to control everything it makes perfect sense that he would try to shape events after his own ideas. And in the process he got to know several aspects of River's personality- the scholar, the assasin and the adventurer. So you just didn't re-wrote it from the Master's POV, but added things that I think enhanced the story. :)

Of course there had to be a jewel heist!