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Title: Shadows
Pairing: Barbossa/Elizabeth- sort of.
Rating: PG-13
Category: Ficlet- A few of Barbossa's thoughts.
A/N: Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] japanpeterpan for beta.

Written for [livejournal.com profile] nausbionna

Some things occurred on The Black Pearl when Elizabeth was prisoner there, that she never knew about. She never knew that when she had fallen into an exhausted sleep, made deeper from wine and fear, Barbossa entered her cabin. He walked silently- neither man nor ghost, he could choose how much his presence could be felt, and now he wanted to be unseen. Staying in the shadows so the moonshine couldn't strip him of flesh, he peered at the sleeping girl.

She looked delicate and refined, he could see no likeness to her father. Perhaps her mulishness, though- she was certainly a stubborn child. A pretty girl, but wilful. Oh well, he'd teach her manners eventually. Soon her blood would free them all, and he would be able to feel again. Not shadows of
pleasures, but real ones. Apples... The memory of the taste lingered in his mouth and he licked his bloodless lips.

And then, the girl. To be able to really feel her soft skin, to smell her, taste her. Perhaps he wouldn't even have resort to force. Now she believed herself doomed- surely the realisation that her life had been spared would warm her to him. He fancied that she would be like a cat in heat, screaming and trying to scratch him. She was surely not the kind to just lie there. No, she was the kind of woman a man could enjoy many times.

The shadow of lust flitted through him and for a moment he hesitated. He could take her now, but it would end in disappointment, just as it always did. Better to wait- waiting had some merits, though he was heartily tired of it by now. Still, just a night and a day, that long he could wait. And then the reward would be so much greater.

He left the cabin as silently as he had come. Some things Elizabeth never learned about Barbossa- and that was probably for the best.

Date: 2006-03-25 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] initial-aitch.livejournal.com
Oh, please do more when inspiration strikes you. This pairing is right up your street.
I love the mention of his non-human, non-ghost state. That's such a major dimension of his character. And I adore his patience.
Oh yes, she'd scratch and bite!
Beautiful.

Date: 2006-03-25 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dancing-salome.livejournal.com
Thanks. I've always liked this pairing- of course it's not one ever been written about, just my luck. So if the imspiration strikes, I will. Perhaps the new movie will provide some more source material.

(I'm seriously envious of your WOnka-icons, btw.)

Date: 2006-03-25 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] initial-aitch.livejournal.com
I told my friend (Barbossa fan) [livejournal.com profile] st_minority to come check out this story. You'll have at least one other fan! Perhaps the two of you can encourage each other.

(I've been having fun making the icons, now that I can screencap!)

Date: 2006-03-25 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dancing-salome.livejournal.com
That's nice of you. Let's hope she likes it.

(I wish I could make screencaps.)

Date: 2006-03-25 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dancing-salome.livejournal.com
BTW, I think you would like the last fic on [livejournal.com profile] peterpanslash. Made me laugh anyway.

Date: 2006-03-25 08:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] initial-aitch.livejournal.com
I'm not a member...but I'll go join, why not?
Any caps you want in particular I'd be happy to make. I have the Jason Isaacs Hook "Peter Pan" too.

Date: 2006-03-26 12:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dancing-salome.livejournal.com
I think you can read the fics anyway, but I may be wrong. But why not join anyway. :-)

I can't think of any caps offhand, but if I do, I will let you know.

Date: 2006-03-26 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bad-form.livejournal.com
Oh, this is lovely! Please write more! I remember seeing that you mentioned this pairing in one of your recent posts (yes, I do check my flist, although 99% of the time I am an asshat and neglect to comment -- *sheepish* Sorry!) And I was excited then. You did not disappoint, naturally! *g* Barbossa is one of my favorite characters and Barbossa/Elizabeth is shockingly scarce. Would love to see what else you could do with it!

Date: 2006-03-27 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dancing-salome.livejournal.com
Thank you. If I get a good ifea I will certainly pursure it. I like Barbossa. Well, I like pirates...

Date: 2006-03-27 07:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bad-form.livejournal.com
Pirates are always good fun. =D

Date: 2006-03-28 08:07 pm (UTC)

Date: 2006-03-26 03:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenegal.livejournal.com
Ooooh! Barbossa is certainly an interesting character. I'm too predictable in this, but I was totally rooting for him in the movie. Though I love Jack Sparrow too. :-)

This is nicely done. I love how you describe his thoughts and plans. Almost too bad that it didn't work out as planned (well, at least in the movie, heh).

Date: 2006-03-27 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dancing-salome.livejournal.com
Thank you. I liked both Barbossa and Jack. Will Turner on the other hand...

Date: 2006-03-27 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] selenegal.livejournal.com
I know... To think that I actually went for Orlando Bloom... But the moment Capt Jack appeared on the screen, I was totally entranced!

Date: 2006-03-28 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dancing-salome.livejournal.com
Well, as you have corrected your ewrring path I shall forgive you. ;-)

Date: 2006-03-31 01:43 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
This is great! There are so few stories between Elizabeth and Barbossa. Are you going to write more?

Date: 2006-04-06 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dancing-salome.livejournal.com
I will, if I get any more ideas. Hopefully I will after the next movie. :-)

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