Perfect

Jun. 19th, 2006 01:37 am
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Title: Perfect (Charlie and the Chocolate Factory)
Pairing: None, really
Rating: R
Category: I think disturbing content is very apt here.
A/N: Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] japanpeterpan for beta.

Willy Wonka just wants his collection to be perfect.

The fabric is vast. Rooms and corridors stapled onto each other. Rooms within rooms, sometimes another one, making the whole of it a labyrinth. To keep people out. To keep people in.

He started his collection by coincidence. Nothing planned at all. He had just seen something he knew he had to have. The unusual, the perfect. It was perfection he wanted, and when he found it, he had to find it a place close by. The music, the art, the beauty. Each and every item in his collection was unique, without comparison. Treated with the utmost care. Presented in a setting that made them even more luminous. Carefully thought out to enhance, always to enhance.

They are all kept close to each other in a special part of the fabric. Not together, but still close. He wanders there most every day, listens and watches and delights in what he has. He is very good in keeping them and making them grow. True, there is a darkness that seems to be unavoidable, but darkness can be perfect too. The singer’s singing is just as lovely, only his voice is tinged with sadness. The beautiful love the mother has for her child only deepens. Oh yes, he doesn't mind it at all.

But sometimes he fails, and now he has to admit defeat with the dancer. She was the most exquisite form he had ever seen. Her movements graceful but fully controlled- even the smallest muscle worked in harmony with the other. He craved her as soon as he saw her, but she never danced again. He had tried to tempt her with music, every kind of music, but she never moved.

And then she stopped eating. Not even chocolate, the richest he could made, passed her lips. Nothing. She is so thin now, but, he finds to his surprise, still perfect. Her dark skin stretches over bones, delicate and beautiful, and he realises that she is not a waste after all. Instead of her movements, it's her stillness he has to preserve.

And when all the last shallow breathing is gone, and she is still, he actually goes inside. Not for long. Just to ensure that she is posed to his liking, and then he leaves. No living creature will ever go into that room again, because now he lets the cold in. Bitter cold that wraps her in tiny glittering ice crystal. Like diamonds they glitter in the light. So beautiful. Nothing but her beauty and the ice. Perfection.

He looks at her for a long time, before he wanders off to enjoy something else.

Re: That picture is terrific!

Date: 2006-06-29 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dancing-salome.livejournal.com
Salome was the step-daughter of Herod, who lusted after her. She, on the other hand was in love with John the Baptist, who rejected her. Her mother, who wanted John dead, made her to promise to dance for Herod, in exchange for whatever she wanted. Which was John's head on a platter. She got her wish, but when she kissed the head, Herod was so disgusted so he had her crushed to death.

Oscar Wilde wrote a very good play about it, and it's from there I took my LJ-name.

Re: That picture is terrific!

Date: 2006-07-01 07:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theidolhands.livejournal.com
I don't think I knew that story and I love it. Thank you for telling it to me. I must say, I've found the reason people choose thier names/identities on Live Journal to be REALLY interesting; at least usually with creative types. They seldom choose their identities Willy nilly. I went Willy, but not "nilly". Oh dear, that was a pun worthy of the candymaker.

Re: That picture is terrific!

Date: 2006-07-02 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dancing-salome.livejournal.com
I really recomend Wilde's play, especially if it has the original Art Noveau illustration. By Abruey Beardley, I think. I've been facinated by Salome since I was a kid and saw Rita Hayworth play her. ANd then I grew into Wilde, and became a little more infatuated. You can read her in many way, as an intrigant, spoiled slut, or a young girl who are used by her peers for their own motives, and has to pay dearly for it.

See, now I'm yalking away. Well, strat me up on literature, or movies, and I'll go one forever.

Re: That picture is terrific!

Date: 2006-07-03 01:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theidolhands.livejournal.com
I appreciate it. I think multiple interpritations of that character would be great; the character does ask to be examined from more than one point of view (like another someone that I tend to enjoy).

What type of movies/literature do you tend to like. Do you have a journal entry about it? I tend to prowl through the journals of new friends eventually but feel free to give me direction if need be.

Re: That picture is terrific!

Date: 2006-07-05 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dancing-salome.livejournal.com
I've always been facinated withcharacters that can be both good and evil. WOnka is one of them, obviously. ANd Peter Pan and Captain Hook is another- most of my fics are about Hook...

I do tend to impose my thoughts of literature and music, but at pretty irregular occasions. I'm not really bound by any specific genres, but read and watch what takes my fancy. Anyway, my LJ is more about interests- to the point of pointlessness- than hwat goes on in my RL.

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